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1、寫作指導(dǎo) (5) 開放作文
開放作文與傳統(tǒng)意義上的書面表達(dá)是形似而神不似,是一種全新的書面表達(dá)形式。隨著高考英語改革進(jìn)程的不斷深入與發(fā)展,相信英語書面表達(dá)的命題形式也會(huì)日趨靈活與開放。開放作文更能反映出考生的真實(shí)寫作水平。
1.開放作文的命題特點(diǎn)
(1)自由發(fā)揮的空間大
開放作文屬于非控制性寫作或非任務(wù)型寫作,即主要根據(jù)文字提示、圖畫展示或表格列舉等形式設(shè)題,留有一定的空間讓考生自由發(fā)揮。
(2)能力要求拔高
開放作文對考生的能力要求較高,考查也更全面。它不僅考查考生的語言表達(dá)能力、語言組織能力,而且還考查考生的邏輯思維能力、發(fā)散思維能力、想像能力以及多角度考慮問題的能力。
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2.開放作文的寫作步驟
(1)認(rèn)真審題,把握要求,找準(zhǔn)關(guān)鍵句
(2)依據(jù)主線,草擬提綱,梳理文章脈絡(luò)
(3)定位人稱,確立時(shí)態(tài),遣詞造句組篇章
①開放作文通常以提供一個(gè)故事材料為主,人稱的使用較為靈活,考生應(yīng)該依據(jù)文章提示準(zhǔn)確定位人稱。
②確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài)后,考生應(yīng)將重點(diǎn)放在文章的遣詞造句上??忌鷳?yīng)盡可能運(yùn)用自己熟悉的單詞、短語或句型來靈活表達(dá)。
請根據(jù)下面的英文短詩,展開適當(dāng)?shù)南胂瘢瑢懸黄涛?。?biāo)題為:My Teacher Mr Moore
There’s a teacher Mr Moore,
Who is lovely and thirtyfour,
Always
3、 encouraging us to try,
He leads us to a world of “why”.
We all admire him more and more.
注意:1.不得照抄短詩原文;
2.必須結(jié)合短詩的內(nèi)容,發(fā)揮想像,適當(dāng)展開;
3.必須突出短詩的主題,結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語意連貫;
4.短文不能寫成詩歌形式;
5.詞數(shù):120左右。
案例分析⊙
要寫好開放作文,考生首先要具備對文字的理解能力。本題所給材料是一首英文短詩,這首短詩的第一句引出了要描寫的人物,接下來應(yīng)展開合理想像,向人們展示所要描寫人物的形象和特征。短詩的后三句對人物的內(nèi)在品質(zhì)進(jìn)行了準(zhǔn)確的概括。
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My Teacher Mr Moore
Of all my teachers,Mr Moore is the one who impresses me most.Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age.And he’s one of the most popular teachers in our school.
Compared with other teachers,Mr Moore pays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make
5、 his classes lively and interesting.In his opinion,we should not only know “what”,but also understand “why”.So,instead of giving us answers immediately,he encourages us to think by ourselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help,we’ve learned how to analyze and settle problems.What a wond
6、erful world of “why” he leads us to!
He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.
請你根據(jù)所給材料、提綱以及要求寫一篇英文稿件。
背景材料:
注意:1.短文詞數(shù)不少于80(不含已寫好的部分);
2.內(nèi)容充實(shí),結(jié)構(gòu)完整,語意連貫;
3.書寫須清晰、工整。
提綱:
第1段:Lora利用暑假打工的理由;
第2段:Lora父母不同意的理由;
第3段:你給Lora的具體建議。
I think that Lora wants to work parttime f
7、or these reasons.________________________________________________________________________
【參考答案】
I think that Lora wants to work parttime for these reasons.First,she can make some pocket money to meet her daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence.Second,she can learn how to deal with
8、various problems in the workplace.Third,she can build up new friendships and improve her social skills.
But her parents may regard learning as an increasingly important task for Lora.This holiday should be a catchup time for independent study.Besides,personal safety may also be one of their major considerations.
My advice for Lora is this:make a detailed plan for her study and work;ask her friends to work together with her,and tell her parents that she can manage things properly.I wish Lora a pleasant summer.