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1、概要寫作summary What is a summary?A summary is a brief statement that gives only the main points of something, not the details. 牛津高階英漢雙解詞典 1考綱要求 1. 考綱要求概要寫作。提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生基于該短文寫出一篇60詞左右（少于40或多于80詞扣兩分）的內(nèi)容概要。閱卷時(shí)主要考慮以下內(nèi)容：1.對原文要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2.應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3.上下文的連貫性；4.對各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。 2寫作特點(diǎn) 2. 寫作特點(diǎn) be thoroug
2、h be briefrestate/own wordsbe objective 3 寫作步驟 分段閱讀找要點(diǎn)改寫修改 Read two or three times to find the structure.Divide the whole passage into several parts and find the key point of each part.Rewrite the key points by using your own words.Polish the whole passage. 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。 We shouldnt ju
3、dge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say that when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at? One of the most important things is clothes, but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear
4、 that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion. Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform help
5、s them to be serious about their studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they cant judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable. However, it is not only schools that want people to dres
6、s in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police officers wear uniforms to deter
7、crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companies have dress codes for their staf
8、f because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes. But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment. When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious abo
9、ut what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us.Para.1Para.3Para.2Para.4 Before writing:Read for structure and key points Reading for StructureH ow many parts can we divide the passage?Para 1：Part1 topicpara2: evidence/examplepara3: evidence/ex
10、ample Part 2 supporting detailspara4: Part3 conclusion How to Get K ey Points?topic sentence for each paragraph Find: the first/ last sentence/join them together Summarize in your own words Read for Key PointsPara.1 We shouldnt judge a person by their appearance but we do. In fact, the experts say t
11、hat when we meet someone for the first time we make a decision about what that person is like in three seconds. But what do we look at? One of the most important things is clothes, but it isnt the brand of clothes that people wear that is important. The important thing is to wear the right clothes f
12、or the occasion. _ _ Point 1_ Read for Key PointsPara.2 Schools have always understood this and a lot of them ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? A lot of teachers think a uniform makes students feel that they are part of their school and that their uniform helps them to be serious about thei
13、r studies. Teachers say that uniforms can help in other ways too. If all the students wear uniforms, they cant judge each other because of their clothes. It also avoids arguments about who or what is fashionable. _1. _2. _ Point 2_ 3. _ 4. _benefits Read for Key PointsPara. 3 However, it is not only
14、 schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear. If we visit a doctor, we expect to see respectable clothes under the doctors white coat. When we go into a bank we expect the staff to wear suits or dresses. Police
15、 officers wear uniforms to deter crime by establishing a visible presence while on patrol, to make themselves easily identifiable to non-police officers or their colleagues who require assistance, and to quickly identify each other at crime scenes for ease of coordination. In fact, a lot of companie
16、s have dress codes for their staff because they know that the customers expect to see them dressed in certain types of clothes. _ Point 3_ Read for Key PointsPara.4 But can our clothes really tell people what we are like? Maybe not, but they can show our attitude to what we are doing at the moment.
17、When people see us in the right clothes, they think we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, if we are clean, smart and polite, people will have confidence in us._ Point 4 List the Key PointsPara. K ey points1 It is important to wear the right clothes for the occasion.2 Schools ask their
18、 students to wear a uniform. Why? 3 However, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what the people in a certain profession should wear a doctora bank Police officers a lot of companies 4 right clothes can show our attitude that we are seriou
19、s about what we are doing. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us. After reading:restate the key points in your own words in a different way How to restate?2. use synonyms (同義詞的運(yùn)用)3. summarize examples (概括) 5. combine sentences (合并句子)4. sometimes change the voice (主被動語態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換)1. change the sente
20、nce structure (句型轉(zhuǎn)換) Examples of restating the key pointsKey point 1 The important thing is to wear the right clothes for the occasion.restate Wearing right clothes for occasions is significant.Since judging a person by their appearance is unavoidable, wearing proper clothes for different occasions
21、is more than vital.Clothes should be worn suitably for different occasions Examples of restating the key pointsKey point 2 Schools ask their students to wear a uniform. Why? restate Students are required to wear uniforms for various benefits.Teachers think uniforms can make student serious about the
22、ir study seriously and avoid arguments.wearing uniforms at school can help students become serious about their study and avoid many problems Examples of restating the key pointsKey point 3 H owever, it is not only schools that want people to dress in a certain way. We all have fixed ideas about what
23、 the people in a certain profession should wear a doctora bank Police officers a lot of companies restate Different jobs need different clothes for customers expectations. People should attach importance to what they wear in certain ways. Different professions should dress themselves in certain ways
24、. Examples of restating the key pointsKey point 4 Right clothes can show our attitude that we are serious about what we are doing. Furthermore, people will have confidence in us.restate Suitable clothes can show others we are serious and confident. Suitable clothes can make other aware of our seriou
25、sness and confidence. Proper clothes can present our attitudes such as being serious and confident. After writing: Use proper conjunctions(連接詞） to polish your passage. Introduction: The passage/article focuses on/mainly tells us 表轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, though, although 表并列、遞進(jìn)：as well as, in addition to, n
26、ot only.but also, besides, whats more, furthermore,. 表對比：meanwhile, on the other hand, on the contrary, contrast ,. 表列舉：firstly/secondly/finally/. 表原因：because (of) ,due to, on account of,.; for 表舉例：for example/instance, such as, and so on Ending：therefore, consequently, In short, in conclusion, in a
27、 word 使用合適的連接詞 Sample： The article mainly tells us wearing proper clothes is important for peoples first impressions.(要點(diǎn)1) For example, schools require students to wear uniforms for various benefits.(要點(diǎn)2) Besides schools, other places, like hospitals, banks, police stations and some companies also w
28、ant their staffs to dress in uniforms properly. (要點(diǎn)3) In conclusion, our clothes can show our attitudes, such as being serious and having confidence .(要點(diǎn)4) (62詞) some mistakes 83 words key point missing Conclusion： How to Write a Good Summary?1.仔 細(xì) 閱 讀 文 本 ： 讀 結(jié) 構(gòu) 、 讀 主 題 句 、 讀 關(guān) 鍵 信 息 。2. 用 自 己 的 語 言 表 述 文 章 的 關(guān) 鍵 點(diǎn) ， 注 意 句 子 的 語 法 結(jié) 構(gòu) 和 詞 匯的 準(zhǔn) 確 性 ， 避 免 抄 襲 原 句 ， 不 遺 漏 要 點(diǎn) 。 (段 落 =要 點(diǎn) )3. 運(yùn) 用 適 當(dāng) 的 連 接 詞 潤 色 文 章 。4. 關(guān) 注 所 寫 概 要 的 詞 數(shù)
《概要寫作》PPT課件.ppt
