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1、單擊此處編輯母版標題樣式,單擊此處編輯母版文本樣式,第二級,第三級,第四級,第五級,*,完型填空 15,語法填空 10,閱讀理解 35,信息匹配 5-10,基礎(chǔ)寫作 15,讀寫任務 25,高考英語答題時間,注意答題順序：試卷順序（先易后難；作文最后）,時間就是分數(shù)，時間就是金錢，時間就是前途,高金海,莫小梅,劉榮杰,黃欣,許杏,楊天生,梁媚,羅洪慧,林進娣,廖柏鴻,126,123,120,120,119,119,118,117,113,113,120:,4,110:,10,100:,16,90:,18,89:,23,班平均分:,95.24,級平均分：,96.03,理科排：,13 名,鄧數(shù)紅,何
2、偉,楊富美,李彬,黃振鳳,何月琳,陳秋孟,黃馨瑩,黃曉青,梁可兵,125,122,120,119,119,118,118,118,117,114,120:,3,110:,10,100:,12,90:,17,89:,32,班平均分:,92.05,級平均分：,96.03,理科排：,23 名,基礎(chǔ)寫作,存在問題：,1.詞匯嚴重缺乏，很多內(nèi)容無法表達,2.中式英文,逐字翻譯，不按文法。,3.時態(tài)錯誤：,4.書寫潦草，卷面不整潔。,5.有相當部分的學生沒寫作文或?qū)懸粌删洹?我國首次對高速公路行駛的小汽車實行免費運行政策,Our country is first time to carry out the
3、 policy that cars drive on the highway are free.,第一句要用一般過去時，而誤用了一般現(xiàn)在時，陳述觀點本來要用一般現(xiàn)在時或一般將來時的，但學生誤用了一般過去時等。,十一黃金周,小汽車實行免費通行,刺激消費,第三產(chǎn)業(yè),親友駕車相聚,人與人距離拉近了,車流量猛增,事故發(fā)生率上升,the National Day holiday,free passage was given to cars on the highway,cars can run on the highway for free,you can drive cars on the highw
4、ay for free,stimulate consumption,the third industry,friends and relatives reunite with each other by car,bring people closer,the traffic flow will increase tremendously,higher accident rate,好句子：,1.Some people are in favor of it for the reason that,not only,can it stimulate consumption,which,is bene
5、ficial to the development of the third industry such as tourism,but also,it contributes a lot to our getting closer to our relatives and friends by driving to visit them often.,2.Whats more,sharing cars with friends or relatives can make each other closer.,During the last National Day holidays,free
6、passage,was given to cars on the highway for the first time ever,which caused a heated discussion nationwide.,On the bright side,some believe that it is good to,stimulate consumption,and,boost the third industry,such as tourism.To some extent,this policy brings people closer,for those who were,reluc
7、tant,to visit their friends are somehow,seduced,to reunite by car.,However,with cars,flocking,to the highways,others are concerned that the traffic flow will increase,tremendously,resulting in worse traffic jam and higher accident rate.,Personally,free passage is what the public have been longing fo
8、r,but more following measures should be taken,for example,some contingency plans should be made to deal with the potential problems and more clear road signs are needed to give drivers precise guidance.,讀寫任務,存在問題：,A.概括部分：,1、概括要點不全,2、概括的表述錯誤：,The passage tells us that a nation survey about the sense
9、of happiness.,1).,CCTV did a survey about whether you were happy,2).most people gave a positive answer while some didnt,3).,the Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didnt know whether he was happy or not,B.正文部分：,1.書寫潦草，涂改太多，卷面不整潔。,2.每段段首空格不夠，全卷分段不明顯，影響卷面效果。,3.時態(tài)錯誤。,在正文部分第二段描述一件幸福的事時，有些學生全沒有應該用一般過去時的概念，
10、或者有的學生忘了謂語動詞的相應詞尾變化。,4.內(nèi)容不夠充實。,5.存在一些表述錯誤。如：謂語都是be+動詞原形（my parents is love me.）、詞性亂用（happy is very simply.）等,尤其中式英文出現(xiàn)率很高。,好句子：,1.As far as I am concerned,I firmly believe that I do live happily for the reason that I have so many people to love and to be loved.,2.Although I will face some challenges sometimes,I feel satisfied as they are too small compared with the people who are suffering from hunger,cold and all kinds of illness.,3.As far as I am concerned,happiness lies in the process of pursuing our dreams and the moment when we achieve them.,
茂名一模寫作課件
