江蘇省2019高考英語 第三部分 寫作層級訓(xùn)練 第一步 循序漸進提升寫作技能 第八講 巧奪天工的連篇技巧課件.ppt

第八講巧奪天工的連篇技巧,有效地使用語句間的連接成分巧妙地銜接過渡，利用好“開篇、承接、轉(zhuǎn)折、總結(jié)”四個方法使文章流暢自然，是考生在書面表達題目上爭創(chuàng)高分的非常重要的條件。一、開篇創(chuàng)造良好開端1.常用表達“開篇”的過渡詞語(常用在段落或文章的開頭),first，firstofall，atfirst，inthefirstplace，firstly，tostartwith，recently，now，atpresent，inrecentyears，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，atpresent，lately，currently等。,2.常用表達“開篇”的句型,(1)Itisoftensaidthat.(2)Astheproverbsays.(3)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.(4)Itisclear/obviousthat.(5)Manypeopleoftenask.FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(陜西卷)ItsoftensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays，nopains，nogains.(北京卷),二、承接順勢承上又啟下1.常用表達“承接”的過渡詞語,secondly，inaddition，besides，moreover，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，inotherwords，especially，particularly，obviously，atthesametime，nodoubtmeanwhile，asaconsequence等。,2.常用表達“承接”的句型：,(1)Itistruethat.(2)Everybodyknowsthat.(3)Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat.(4)Noonecandenythat.(5)Thereasonwhy.isthat.(6)Thereisnodoubtthat.(7)Totake.forexample(instance).,(8)Whatismoreseriousisthat.Inaddition，IwillgoonatriptoSichuan，wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile，Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence，childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.,三、轉(zhuǎn)折利用轉(zhuǎn)折巧過渡1.常用表達“轉(zhuǎn)折”的過渡詞語,but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inanycase，or，orelse，while，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof，instead等。,2.常用表達“轉(zhuǎn)折”的句型,(1)Everycoinhastwosides.(2)Butfor.Iwouldnever.(3)Anotherexampleisthat.(4)Takingeverythingintoconsideration.(5)ThatswhyIfeelthat.Therewillbemanychallengesahead，butIhaveconfidencethatIlltakeontheburden.However，itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.,四、總結(jié)完美結(jié)束全文常用表達“總結(jié)”的過渡詞語：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，aboveall，finally，inconclusion，atlast，insummary，asaresult，onthewhole，inonesopinion等。1.Somethingmustbedoneto.2.Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom.that.3.Inmyopinion，wecandrawtheconclusionthat.4.Itmaybesummedupasfollows.,常用表達“總結(jié)”的句型：Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows：itshightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion，peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.,跟蹤訓(xùn)練,.完成句子1._theInternet，putersplayanimportantroleinpeopleslife.2._，themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.3._，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.,隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，計算機在人們的生活中起著重要作用。總的來說，你練習(xí)越多，用英語寫作就越熟練。就拿北京來說吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。,Withthedevelopmentof,Generallyspeaking/Onthewhole/Ingeneral,TakeBeijingforexample,4._，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.5._，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.6._，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.7._，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.,也就是說，如果你想成功，必須相信自己。就我而言，我喜歡財富，但我更看重健康。按照我的觀點，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場所抽煙。總之，一個好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。,Thatistosay,AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup,8._，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.9._，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethemunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.,另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動來豐富我們的業(yè)余時間。更糟的是，如果我們在電話上花費過多的時間，我們會失去將來需要的交際技能。,Besides/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore,Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse,.完成短文1._，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2._Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3._，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的書籍、報紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來放好，然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。,Firstly,Then,Afterthat,.翻譯句子1.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會升入重點大學(xué)。2.游泳不但對身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅強意志。3.然而，使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。4.相反，智能手機不僅占用我們寶貴的時間，而且對我們的健康造成極大的危害。,_,Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.,Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.,However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.,Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.,5.多虧醫(yī)生的及時治療，他獲救了。6.因此，我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時間用于體育運動和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心，就一定會成功。8.如果我們忽視我們的未來，就像圖畫中的這個人一樣，我們就會以失敗告終。,_,Thankstothedoctorstimelytreatment，hewassaved.,Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.,Aslongasyoudontloseheart，youresuretosucceed.,Ifweneglectourfuture，wellendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.,.用方框內(nèi)的過渡詞完成下面的短文second，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，whatsworse，insteadof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known1._，onlineshoppingisbeingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2._，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3._searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchtheputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4._，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedonthavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownontheputerscreenatthesametime.,Asiswell-known,Ontheonehand,Insteadof,Second,5._，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownontheputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.6._，wecanbecheatedeasily.7._，wecannotseethethingsindetail.8._，9._thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.10._weshoulddevelopit.,Ontheotherhand,Asaresult,Whatsworse,Inaword,despite,So,