增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的技巧[公開課課件].ppt

Tips on how to enhance the effectiveness of your writing,授課者：魏書峰,Learning objectives:,After this lesson, you are expected to master the following writing skills to achieve the necessary effectiveness of your writing. 1. Using some advanced words. 2. Using some advanced structures. 3. Using Some proper connective words,Criteria and requirements for NMET .,覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。,第五檔（很好）（2125分）：,高考考綱對書面表達(dá)的要求,詞匯反映你知識(shí)貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。,運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝 。,使用恰當(dāng)連接詞，對寫一篇有“英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、緊湊。,增強(qiáng)書面表達(dá)效果的策略,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out / proved to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free of charge for the students there.,A good idea flashed into my mind.,Owing to/Due to,We all regard him as great man.,A good idea came to me in a flash.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,On hearing that he had died, she went pale with sorrow.,巧用習(xí)語-增加文采,8.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 9.You can find my house easily. 10.Many houses are being built.,Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,Many houses are under construction.,洋味十足-才是好文章,11. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. 12. I was very eager to go home. 13. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!”,I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.,I couldnt wait to go home. I hunger for going home. I long for going home. I am dying to go home.,She shouted at the top of her voice, “Ive made it!”,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒裝句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虛擬語氣）,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,二、怎樣使用較豐富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have won the competition but for your help.,6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞) 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. （使用讓步狀語從句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,一.補(bǔ)充句子,根據(jù)中文意思，將下列英文句子補(bǔ)充完整。 1.你給了我許多幫助，也給了我許多鼓舞?？傊瑳]有你我不能成功。 You gave me much help and encouragement. _ _ _, I couldnt have succeeded without you.,In a word,三、怎樣使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞,2.總的說來，你的回答不太令人滿意。 _ _ _, your answer is not so satisfying. 3.一般說來物理比數(shù)學(xué)難學(xué)得多。 , physics is much more difficult than mathematics.,All in all,Generally speaking,4.令我滿意的是，他數(shù)學(xué)考試得了滿分。 _ _ _, he got full marks in the mathematics exam. 5.令我驚恐的是， 我看見他從樹上摔了下來。 _ _ _, I saw him fall down from the tree. 6.這輛自行車真的很漂亮，然而我沒錢買。 This bike is really very beautiful. , I have no money to buy it.,To my satisfaction,To my horror,Nevertheless,7.他首先去了法國，然后又去了美國。 First, he went to France; _ he went to America. 8.令我高興的是， 我終于說服她改變了主意。 _ _ _ . I finally persuaded her to change her mind.,then,To my joy,9.一開始他反對我的計(jì)劃， 但最后他支持我的計(jì)劃了。 At first he was against my plan, but _ _ _ he was for it. 10.你必須購買一些生活必需品。 你必須了解一些關(guān)于這個(gè)國家的信息。總之， 你必須為這次旅行做好準(zhǔn)備。 You should buy some living necessities. You should learn something about this country. _ _ _, you must get everything ready for this journey.,In the end,In a word,二. 行文邏輯訓(xùn)練,閱讀短文，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡性詞匯填空。,first, whats worse/more, besides/in addition, now, in my opinion, As far as Im concerned, in my view, from the point of my view.,_1_ many middle school students are fat and there are reasons for it. Some eat too much met and too many snacks. Some sit too long but seldom exercise. Getting fat has quite a few disadvantages. _2_, being fat makes it difficult for one to walk or move as others.,Now,First,_3_ , to be fat usually means to be weak, and it is easy for a fat person to suffer from many kinds of diseases. At the same time. A fat person gets tired easily, which decreases his study efficiency. _4_, to be fat is not a good thing for us middle students. We should try to eat less meat but more vegetables. _ we should try our best to take part in all kinds of sports. If so, we are sure to lose weight and stay healthy.,Whats more,In my opinion,Besides,三. 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)訓(xùn)練,給下面的書面表達(dá)的主題句排序： 你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)生雙語報(bào)組織的一場頭論。討論的主題是：城市內(nèi)是否可以飼養(yǎng)寵物。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給該報(bào)社寫一篇文章，介紹討論情況，并說明自己的觀點(diǎn)或建議。用5個(gè)句子完成文章。,A. Some students are against the idea of keeping pets. B.Some students think its a good idea to keep pets. C.I think we can keep pets at home but we must prevent them from polluting our environment. D.Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets or not at home in cities. E.In general, opinions differ from people to people.,D,E,B,A,C,請根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容，闡述一下你對減少城市人口的看法。,Homework,Thanks for your attending our class!,