三維設(shè)計2013屆高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專題講座課件:第十一講 應(yīng)用文(一)——書信、電子郵件
,題目要求 (2011·全國卷)假定你是李華,你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信,內(nèi)容主要包括: 1說明你是該報的忠實讀者 2贊賞該報優(yōu)點: 1)兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞 2)介紹名人成功故事 3提出建議: 刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章,注意: 1詞數(shù)100左右,開頭語己為你寫好; 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! _ _ _ _ Sincerely yours, Li Hua,技法指導(dǎo) 書信、電子郵件的寫作是高考中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的一種題型。從內(nèi)容上看,近幾年高考書信寫作主要包括致歉信、致謝信、筆友信、慰問信、投訴信、邀請信、介紹信、求職信、讀者請求的解答信及其答復(fù)讀者的信等。不論哪種形式,一般都有固定的寫作模式,只要記住其特定的寫作模板,并能在具體的寫作中加以融會貫通,一定能讓你的作文水平快速提高,從而在考場上寫出檔次較高的文章。下面介紹一下幾種常考書信的模板,供大家寫作時借鑒。,,,1投訴信 Dear _, My name is/I am _. I am writing to you for _. Firstly, _. Secondly, _. Thirdly, _. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. To be honest/Honestly speaking, _. Therefore, I do require(hope) _. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely yours, Li Ming,2建議信 Dear _, I am _. Your collection of suggestion on _ is _. As is known, _. My suggestions are _: First, _. (People can _.) Second, (to make economic profits, ) _. Third, _. (As many of them _.),I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details(Or:Your kind consideration of my suggestions will be highly appreciated) Good luck with your _(祝愿) Yours sincerely, Li Ming,3求職信 Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in _(報紙名稱) of _(廣告發(fā)布時間) I am _ from _.As a/an _, I have been _.Besides, I won _ in _. If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at _.,I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,4邀請信 Dear _, How is everything with you? I am writing to tell you that there will be a _(內(nèi)容) at/in _(地點) on _(時間)We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at _(具體時間). This will be followed by a _(進(jìn)一步的安排)At around _(時間),_(另一個安排),Ring me up and tell me whether you will come or not, will you? I really hope you can make it.My phone number is _.Looking forward to _. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,5感謝信 Dear _, I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for _(感謝的原因) If it had not been for your assistance in _(對方給你的具體幫助),I fear that I would have been _(沒有對方幫助的后果),Everyone agrees that it was you who _(給出細(xì)節(jié))Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,6道歉信 Dear _, I am truly sorry that _(道歉的原因) The reason is that _(介紹原因). Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Ming,第一步 構(gòu)建框架,清晰行文 謀篇布局,黃金模板 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! I'm _(介紹自己). I like it very much for_(兩個理由). First, it covers _(優(yōu)勢之一) so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn _(了解的事情) during the week. _(優(yōu)勢之二) are the success stories of worldfamous people which help me _(對自己的幫助).,As a young student, I suggest _ (建議) to guide us in our English learning, and I hope _ (希望) Sincerely yours, Li Hua,第二步 打造亮句,增色文章 1首先,它兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞,因此,我隨便翻幾頁就可以了解到本周發(fā)生的重要事件。 Firstly, there are both national and international news on it. So when I turn the pages simply, I can know all important things happened during the week. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.,2作為一名年輕的學(xué)生,我建議Global Mirror刊登一些指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章。 As a young student, I make a suggestion that Global Mirror publish some articles that can guide us in our English learning. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning.,第三步 串句成文,保證流暢 Dear EditorinChief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! I'm a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of worldfamous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.,As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,(2011·山東高考)假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國朋友Tom上個月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽(speech contest),你在資料搜集、語言運用等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點給Tom寫一封電子郵件: 1詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況; 2談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫忙; 3告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。,注意:1.詞數(shù):120150; 2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。 _ _ _ _,參考范文: Dear Tom, How time flies! It has been a month since you came to Beijing. How is everything going on with your life and study now?,What excited me most is that I will go to Beijing to attend an English speech contest to be held in summer holiday in July for middle school students. But unfortunately, I'm encountering many difficulties in collecting materials needed and I also have problems in the application of the language. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.,Here is good news for you. I've decided to go to see you after the English speech contest. I am looking forward to seeing you. Best wishes to you and your parents! Yours, Li Hua,