（江蘇專用）高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 主題36“記”文娛活動

三、考題示例你校學(xué)生會準(zhǔn)備辦一期英語墻報，主題為：保護(hù)環(huán)境從我做起。請你根據(jù)下圖所示寫一篇英語短文。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。What Can I Do for Our Environment?Everyone can do something for our environment.【參考范文】第一檔：滿分作文What Can I Do for Our Environment?Everyone_can_do_something_for_our_environment.When we are in our classroom after 8：30 in the morning，we should not keep the lights on to avoid wasting electricity since there is enough light in the classroom.And if it is cloudy and rainy and lights are on，we should turn off the lights after school.Another thing we can do is to protect the forest which is reducing.We should use both sides of paper and we should not use paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of trees.All these are the things we can do every day to make our environment better. As long as we insist on doing so，our environment will become better and better.點評：作者通過使用情態(tài)動詞should、定語從句、條件狀語從句、時間狀語從句等，將圖畫中所傳達(dá)的信息以及自己的觀點順利地表達(dá)了出來。該文條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整。第三檔：15分What Can I Do for Our Environment?Everyone_can_do_something_for_our_environment. As we all know one_fact，resources_available are not reproducible and become less and less.Our environment is also becoming worse and worse.In the near future，we will face up with big trouble.So from now on we have to save resource and protect our environment.If you leave classroom，do not forget to turn off the lights.You know，electricity is generated from other resource，such as water，charcoal.And to protect environment，first of all we need protect forest.To protect forest，we ought to reduce or refuse to use wooden goods.For an instance，if we have to use paper，use both sides of it，and not use paper cups or disposable chopsticks.點評：文章信息準(zhǔn)確，沒有遺漏要點，符合圖畫作文的寫作要求。文中的處多余；處位置顛倒；處表述不恰當(dāng)；處應(yīng)加上定冠詞the；處應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)；處應(yīng)為don't。