2019-2020年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)針對練三電子郵件普通書信.doc

2019-2020年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)針對練三電子郵件普通書信題目要求(xx云南八校區(qū)聯(lián)考)假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，對這種生活方式很不理解。你就此給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)包括：1陪伴；2照顧；3其他。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Peter，_Yours，Li Hua四步作文法第一步審題謀篇1體裁電子郵件2時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時3人稱第三人稱第二步要點(diǎn)要全1很正常你不理解祖父母與我們一起生活。It_is_normal_that_you_cant_understand why my grandparents are living with us.2眾所周知，老人常常感到孤獨(dú)，我祖父母也同樣。As_we_all_know,_old_people_always_feel_lonely. My grandparents feel lonely too.3當(dāng)我父母忙于工作時，我祖父母可以陪伴我。When my parents are_busy_with_their_work,_my grandparents will keep me pany.4更重要的是，他們身體狀況不好，因此需要照顧，只有用這種方式我們才能彼此相互照顧。Most_importantly,_they are in poor health, so they need looking after. Only in this way can we take good care of each other.5事實(shí)上，在中國幾代人樂意一起生活。Actually, in China generations are_willing_to_live_together.6照顧老人在中國文化中被認(rèn)為是一種美德。Caring for the old is_considered_as_a_virtue in Chinese culture.7在你們的傳統(tǒng)文化中是如何善養(yǎng)老人的？How about your culture of supporting_your_elders?第三步句式要美1句2合并升級so引導(dǎo)的倒裝句式As_we_all_know,_old_people_always_feel_lonely,_so_do_my_grandparents.2句4升級為what引導(dǎo)的主語從句What_is_most_important_is_that_they_are_in_poor_health,_so_they_need_looking_after._Only_in_this_way_can_we_take_good_care_of_each_other.第四步銜接要順Dear_Peter，How are you getting along these days? It is normal that you can not understand why my grandparents are living with us. Here is something about it.As we all know, old people always feel lonely, so do my grandparents. Besides, when my parents are busy with their work, my grandparents will keep me pany. What is most important is that they are in poor health, so they need looking after. Only in this way can we take good care of each other. Actually, in China generations are willing to live together. Caring for the old is considered as a virtue in Chinese culture.How about your culture of supporting your elders? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li_Hua改寫兩用這是根據(jù)本題目學(xué)生完成的一篇習(xí)作，文中有10處錯誤，請改正。Dear Peter，I have received your letter, which say you cant understand my grandparents live with us. Therefore, its a very mon phenomenon which three generations live under the same roof. The reason are as follows.Firstly, it is wellknown that old people often feel lonely, included my grandparents. They are willing to live with us about pany. More importantly, they need to looked after considering our poor health. We live together so that we can know everything about their mental and physically health. Last but not least, it is an tradition and virtue to respect and take good care of the old in China.Im wondering how you support your elders. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua答案：Dear Peter，I have received your letter, which you cant understand my grandparents live with us. ， its a very mon phenomenon three generations live under the same roof. The are as follows.Firstly, it is wellknown that old people often feel lonely, my grandparents. They are willing to live with us pany. More importantly, they need to looked after considering poor health. We live together so that we can know everything about their mental and health. Last but not least, it is tradition and virtue to respect and take good care of the old in China.Im wondering how you support your elders. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua