高考英語一輪復習 寫作指導十 書信、電子郵件類課件 新人教版.ppt

寫作指導十 書信、電子郵件類,1 寫作指導 目前,隨著對英語學習的實用性、生活性要求的加強,書信和電子郵 件已經成了一個熱門體裁的考查形式,常以提綱式作文的形式出現,話題 內容也緊緊圍繞考生的實際生活。此類考查形式不是簡單地對要點逐 條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點科學合理地組織成通順的語句,形成亮點 鮮明的高分作文。 常見的寫作格式如下:第一段,稱呼(通常已給出);第二段,寒暄語句,引出 寫信的目的;第三段,根據提綱擴展主體段落。第四段,表明自己的觀點, 并結束書信主體段落,在最后要向對方談自己的看法;第五段,寒暄句+落款。,2 常用模板積累 模板1 道歉信 Dear (稱呼), Im really sorry to tell you that (所發(fā)生的事情). Will you please accept my apology? (提出希望). Anyway, (總結). Yours, (署名),模板2 感謝信 Dear (稱呼), Thank you very much for/Thanks a lot for/Many thanks for (具體原 因). Without your help (從反面說明). (總結).I appreciate it more than I can say. Yours faithfully, (署名) 模板3 慰問信 Dear (稱呼), Were extremely sorry to hear that (具體信息).,Dont worry about your disease because (原因). Whats more, (進一步安慰對方).Surely (未來預測). Let us hope that it will be (說出愿望),and that you will soon be (祝福). Everyone here sends their best wishes to you for a quick recovery. Yours sincerely, (署名) 模板4 祝賀信 Dear (稱呼), I was delighted to hear the news (具體情況).I congratulate you(表達祝賀).,(總結).We wish to share your honor and joy. Yours sincerely, (署名) 模板 5 邀請信 Dear (稱呼), We would like to invite you to (具體活動名稱).At the celebration, we are going to (活動安排). Everyone hopes .We are going to meet you (時間、地點、方 式). Well, (總結).I do hope you will be able to come. Sincerely yours, (署名),3 寫作典例 (2014天津) 假設你是晨光中學高二(1)班的班長李津,得知美國學生Chris作為交換 生,下學期將到你班學習。請你根據以下提示,給他寫封郵件: (1)表示歡迎; (2)介紹與本地生活相關的信息(如氣候、飲食等); (3)介紹本班情況; (4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增進中美學生間的了解和友誼。,注意: (1)請勿提及與考生相關的真實信息; (2)可適當加入細節(jié),使內容充實、行文連貫; (3)詞數不少于100;開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。 參考詞匯: 交換生exchange student Dear Chris, Im Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven. Yours, Li Jin,【范文】 Dear Chris, Im Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven.Im delighted to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student next term.I feel it an honor for us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you.Firstly,with the climate changing,you should prepare enough clothes.Then it is different kinds of foods and snacks that give you the chance to experience abundant Chinese food culture.In addition,every student can be in harmony with for- eign friends,which makes it easy for you to get along with them.,Last but not least,we can do what we can to help you,but you must get pre- pared to meet all kinds of difficulties.During your stay here,I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learning from each other can we spend these days together happily. Yours, Li Jin 【寫作點評】 (1)第一段開門見山,點明寫作主題;運用了firstly,then,in addition等過渡詞 或短語,使整篇文章緊湊、連貫。 (2)運用了定語從句、賓語從句,豐富了文章句式,彰顯出了作者的寫作功 底。 (3)第二段運用了倒裝句式,把文章推向了高潮。,4 跟蹤訓練 (2015黑龍江哈爾濱師大附中) TEMPORARY JOB OFFERS MAJOR CATERING COMPANY has five temporary jobs as waiters.For more information,write to Ms Kate Rees,17 Park End St. 假設你是某中學的學生李華,得知中國日報刊登招聘臨時服務員的 信息,你有意應聘,請按下列要點給報社寫一封自薦信。 1.年齡20 2.可以工作時間:六月到七月之間 3.說明你的優(yōu)勢及相關經歷 4.希望得到回復,注意:1.詞數:100左右 2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫 Dear Sir or Madam, Yours sincerely, Li Hua,【范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter.I am a 20-year-old student and would be able to work during June and July. I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am inter- ested in a career in the catering industry when I leave university. I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,