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1、Reading passageThese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose d
2、oing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should
3、not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it
4、allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople
5、think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if
6、the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time
7、and live your life at a slower pace Reading passageThese days o1Stepsofwriting1明確主旨結(jié)構(gòu)2尋找主題句3提取主次信息4獨(dú)立表達(dá)5語篇銜接Steps of writing1明確主旨結(jié)構(gòu)2尋找主題句32keywordsfor topicThese days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better for
8、people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probab
9、ly regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly
10、 will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，slower
11、 life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to som
12、e studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much s
13、tress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace live a slower lifeargumentationkeywordsfor topicThese day3StructureThese days our society develops rapidly and forces peopl
14、e to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，its better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen p
15、eople do their jobs or take action in a hurry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly Slowing down the pace of life
16、 helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more time than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the
17、contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stressPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that anno
18、ys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter In short，working qui
19、ckly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace arguments reason1reason2 reason3con
20、clusion thesisStructureThese days our soc4thesisIdentifythetextualpattern.structureofargumentationthesisargument/evidenceconcl5Para.1These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rushIt appears that people have got used to being in a hurryHowever，Sentence Function KeywordsS1S2S3引出要點(diǎn)引出
21、要點(diǎn)提出論點(diǎn)rushget used to,in a hurrylive their life at a slower paceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.1These days our society6Para.2 The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushWhen people do their jobs or take action in a hur
22、ry，they cant make a sound decision and probably regret laterAs the saying goes，Haste makes waste We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quicklyWe should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedlySentence Function Keywords S1S2S3S4,S5 提出要點(diǎn)舉例論證引用論證提出建議reason,possibilty,
23、do wrongsHast makes wastethink carefully,do work less quicklycant make a sound decision Figureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.2 The main reason that 7Para.3Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better For example，taking a train to some place certainly will take more tim
24、e than taking a plane However，taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends Besides，it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the wayOn the contrary，being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives Sentence Function keywordsS1S2,S3
25、,S4S5提出要點(diǎn)舉例論證補(bǔ)充要點(diǎn)help enjoy life betterFor example hurry,lose chances,enjoyingFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.Para.3Slowing down the pace 8Para.4Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us As is known to all，taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stre
26、ssPeople think if they are not in a hurry，they will become a loser and that annoys themBut being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentallyAccording to some studies，people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases，tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense
27、，even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter Sentence Function keywordsS1S2,S3,S4S5提出要點(diǎn)指出危害研究論證hurt,physically and mentallyfewer diseases,happier,live longerFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.better health conditionsPara.4Finally，slower life pa9Para.5In short，working quickly wil
28、l bring about more material benefits to make our society more advancedYet，much stress cant bring enjoyment，friends and health，which are much more important than money and other material advantagesTherefore，take your time and live your life at a slower pace Sentence Function keywordsS1S2S3提及好外對比論證提出要
29、點(diǎn)enjoymet,friends,health,importanttake your time,a slower paceFigureouttherelationshipbetweensentences.material benefitsPara.5In short，working quick10Draft of the versionIts better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done(要點(diǎn)1)The main reason
30、 that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush(要點(diǎn)2)Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better(要 點(diǎn) 3)Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us(要 點(diǎn)4)Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower
31、pace(要點(diǎn)5)點(diǎn)評：【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Draft of the versionIts betteldespitelin spite oflwhilelalthough/though Summary for Para.1However，recommendlsuggestladvise live a slower lifeDespite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society，people are recommended to
32、 lead a slower life【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Summary for Para.1However，it12Summary for Para.2The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rushSlowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by c
33、omprehensive thinking slower down the life make mistakescommit errors【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Summary for Para.2The main re13Summary for Para.3Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life betterMore opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slow
34、er pace【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Summary for Para.3Slowing dow14Summary for Para.4Finally，slower life pace provides better health conditions for us Lastly，betterhealthconditionphysicallyandmentallyisalsowhataslowerlifebrings physical and mental health【概要寫作】【講評】【15
35、】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Summary for Para.4Finally，slo15Summary for Para.5Therefore，take your time and live your life at a slower paceTherefore，letstakeaslowerlifefromnowon【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)Summary for Para.5Therefore，t16 CoherenceT
36、hesisReason 1Reason 2Reason 3Link2:also,likewise,besides,furthermore,in addition,etc.Link3:so,thus,therefore,hence,accordingly,consequently,etc.Uselinkwordsifnecessary.ConclusionLink2:Link1:first,firstly,primarily,initally,at begining,etc.【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT
37、)CoherenceThesisReason 1Reason17OnepossibleversionDespite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society，people are recommended to lead a slower life.(要點(diǎn)1)Primarily，slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors bycomprehensive thinking(要點(diǎn)2)Besides，more opportunitiestoenjoylifeareallo
38、wedbyaslowerpace(要點(diǎn)3)Moreover，betterhealth condition physically and mentally is also what a slower lifebrings(要點(diǎn)4)Therefore，letstakeaslowerlifefromnowon(要點(diǎn)5)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)One possible versionDespite be18The endThe end【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(共19張PPT)The end【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】(
【概要寫作】【講評】【15】【放慢生活節(jié)奏】課件
