《summary writing 概要寫作》由會(huì)員分享，可在線閱讀，更多相關(guān)《summary writing 概要寫作（37頁珍藏版）》請(qǐng)?jiān)谘b配圖網(wǎng)上搜索。
1、2021/6/16 1Summary Writing 高考新題型之 2021/6/16 2Summary Writing 高考新題型之Su y 2021/6/16 3 I helped an old man in rags who had lost his way.I helped an old man detailsmain point Summary?A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details牛津高階英漢雙解詞典讀者在正確理解文章的基礎(chǔ)上, 在不改變?cè)闹行乃枷?/p>
2、、體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)的前提下，省去細(xì)節(jié)，用簡明、精練的語句高度濃縮文章的主要內(nèi)容和觀點(diǎn)。 2021/6/16 4 How to write a good summary?Steps & Tips 2021/6/16 5 Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several ways to make that happen. Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which
3、 help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spen
4、t watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video games. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IPad or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, and these
5、extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or share restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda. People who skip breakfast often
6、 feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight grad
7、ually. And wish you have a good figure. 1.2.3.4.5. 6. (350words) 2021/6/16 6 Read for topic, structure(明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu))2. Find out the key information of each paragraph (劃出每段主題句,或關(guān)鍵詞)3. Rewrite by using your own words(改寫)4. Polish the passage (改良) 2021/6/16 7 Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic： Weight
8、lossStructure: Para1.Para2. Para.6 Topic weight lossWays of losing weightConclusionPara4.Para3. Para2. 2021/6/16 8 概要寫作難點(diǎn) 1 How to get the main points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉各段要點(diǎn))抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵詞，忽略細(xì)節(jié)和例子Step2 Read for main idea of each paragraghTopic sentence or key words 2021/6/16 9 Step2 Read
9、for main idea of each paragragh 1. Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several waysto make that happen.Tip1: The key sentence is usually the first sentence 2021/6/16 10 Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 2.Regular physical activity burns calo
10、ries and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Tip2: Ignore the examples or detailsExamples&details 2021/6/16 11 Step2 Read
11、for main idea of each paragragh 3. One reason people get less exercise these days Is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at thecomputer, or playing video games. Limit recreationalscreen time to less than 2 hours per day. When youreally get away from
12、 “screens”, such as TV, IPad ,computers, or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Tip3: Pick out the key words in different sentence 2021/6/16 12 Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 4. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, andthese extra calories contribute to obesity. Anothe
13、rkey factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary beverages, such as sodas, juice drinks, andsports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or sharerestaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Tip4: pay attention to the logical connectives(邏輯連詞) So, therefore, as a res
14、ult, thus 2021/6/16 13 Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh 5. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. They get more caloriesthan they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMsthan people who eat breakfast.
15、 2021/6/16 14 Step2 Read for main idea of each paragragh6. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure. 2021/6/16 15 Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several
16、ways to make that happen. Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. One reason peo
17、ple get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video games. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IPad or mob
18、ile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, and these extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or share re
19、staurant portions) and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat break
20、fast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure. 1.2.3.4.5. 6. 2021/6/16 16 Step3 rewrite by using your own words概要寫作難點(diǎn) 2 How to express the main points by using your own words properly? (如何靈活詮釋，規(guī)避抄襲的嫌疑) 2021/
21、6/16 17 Step3 rewrite by using your own words1. Weight loss is most likely to be successfulwhen people change their habits.Losing weight Tip1: Use words or phrases of similar meaning （同義替換）if get into new habitsPeople will succeed in losing weight if they get into new habitsChanging some habits may
22、be a good way to lose weight Tip2: Use different sentence structure(改變句子結(jié)構(gòu)，尤其是改變主語) 2021/6/16 18 Step3 rewrite by using your own words2.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Tip3: Turn complex sentences into simple
23、ones （壓縮長句）Leave out unnecessary partsTaking more physical exercise will help you keep healthy. Keep healthy 2021/6/16 19 Step3 rewrite by using your own words“screen time”benefit a lot.limitTip4: Combine the key words logically into a sentence （連詞組句）3.We are supposed to reduce “screen time”.Limitin
24、g “screen time” will benefit us a lot. 2021/6/16 20 Step3 rewrite by using your own words Choose smaller portions (or share restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss. 2021/6/16 21 Step3 Rewr
25、ite by using your own words5. skip breakfastPeople should avoid skipping breakfast.get more calorie 2021/6/16 22 Step3 rewrite by using your own words6. If you really put the above into practicePeople will have a good figure if they take the above suggestionshave a good figuretake / follow the above
26、 suggestions 2021/6/16 23 Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight. Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health. We are supposed to reduce “screen time”. Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss. People should avoid
27、skipping breakfast. People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions. (58W) First, Meanwhile, Besides FinallyStep4 Polish by using connectivesTip: Polish with connectives to make it coherent. 2021/6/16 24 Read for topic, structure(明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu))2. Find out the key information of each para
28、graph (劃出每段主題句,找關(guān)鍵信息)3. Rewrite by using your own words(改寫)4. Polish the passage (改良) 2021/6/16 25 Tips The topic sentence is usually the first sentenceIgnore the examples or detailsPick out the key words in different sentencesUse words or phrases of similar meaning （同義替換）Use different sentence stru
29、cture(改變句子結(jié)構(gòu)，尤其是改變主語)Turn complex sentences into simple ones （壓縮長句） 2021/6/16 26 ExerciseRead and write with the steps and tips 2021/6/16 27 You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necssary to do adequate(充足) research a
30、bout the illness. You may access anumber of resources to gain a deep understanding of this emotional condition. You can also find books or magazines in the library. If you still have some questions, you can see a doctor. In the end, you should havea good idea of what is affecting your friend. People
31、 with depression are often very afraid of talking to someone except their doctors. They can easily be ashamed of their condition and consequently they try to hide it. You shouldnt be surprised if a depressed friend wont open up to you. However , when he or she does , you should let the words flow. D
32、ont be judgemental and never interrupt!Listening is not an easy skill, as its likely that you cant help voicing your opinion. If your friend shows likely signs of depression, such as the feeling of worthlessness, a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying, you should contact a do
33、ctor, scheduel an appointment andaccompany him or her on the first visit. If he or she refuses, let several days go by before making another suggestion. You should be able to identify moments when he or she seems to have better moods. These moments could be the right time to ask him or her to see th
34、e doctor. Over time, your friend begins to cooperate and see the doctor. At last, as a caregiver, you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group so you can meet other caregivers. You shouldnt sacrifice your own physical and mental condition when helping people with depress
35、ion. There are cases when caregivers become depressed. If it happens, there is no shame in seeing a doctor yourself.(320words) 2021/6/16 28 Step1 Read for topic and structureTopic： Helping a friend with depressionStructure: Para1.Para2. Para3. Para4. 2021/6/16 29忽略具體事例和細(xì)節(jié) Step2 Read for main idea of
36、 each paragraghPara.1:Para.2:Para.3:Para.4:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). Depression is a complex emotional illness and it is necessary to do adequate(充足) research about the illness. be afraid of talking (劃主題句,找關(guān)鍵信息)However , when he or she does (talk)Listening
37、is a helpful skill If your friend shows likely signs of depression, such as the feeling of worthlessness, a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolled crying, you should contact a doctor, scheduel an appointment and accompany him or her on the first visit. As a caregiver, you also need so
38、meone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group to keep healthy. 2021/6/16 30 Learn muchStep3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.1:You may want to offer help if your friend falls into depression(抑郁). . it is necessary to do adequate research about the illness. Important, helpfulYou need t
39、o learn more about depression if you want to assist a friend with depression. Doing enough research about depression is helpful for you to help your depressed friend feels depresses 2021/6/16 31 Step3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.2: be afraid of talkingHowever , when he or she does (talk to y
40、ou)ListeningPeople with depression tend to keep silent. Once they speak to you, be a good listener. avoid talking / keep silent 2021/6/16 32 Step3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.3: If your friend shows likely signs of depression, you should encourage him or her to seek professional help. If you
41、r friend shows likely signs of depression, such as the feeling of worthlessness, a lack of interest in daily activities and uncontrolledcrying, you should contact a doctor, scheduel an appointment and accompany him or her on the first visit. see the doctorIf your friend seems to have depression, you
42、 should told him to see the doctor 2021/6/16 33 Step3 Rewrite by using your own wordsPara.4:As a caregiver, you also need someone to talk to and perhaps you may join a support group to keep healthy. When you help a friend with depression, dont forget you own health. 2021/6/16 34 You need to learn mo
43、re about depression if you want to assist a friend with depression. People with depression tend to keep silent. Once they speak to you, be a good listener. If your friend shows likely signs of depression, you should encourage him or her to seek pprofessional help. When you help a friend with depression, dont forget you own health. One possible version: 2021/6/16 35 Checking points Cover the main points using your own words No details No copy No personal opinions About 60 words Use connectives if possible 2021/6/16 36 Thank you! 若有不當(dāng)之處，請(qǐng)指正，謝謝！
summary writing 概要寫作
