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,,,,,,[題目要求] (2011·四川高考)最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)。 1．你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況； 2．你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處； 3．為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議； 4．為學(xué)校開展課外活動(dòng)提出建議。,注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名； 3．稿件的開頭已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools._______________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________,[技法指導(dǎo)] 提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)給出的提示性文字，首先確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開論述，表達(dá)主旨。它的特點(diǎn)是提綱既體現(xiàn)了文章的層次，又規(guī)定了各段大體的內(nèi)容，為考生提供了一條寫作思路。考生稍加思索、計(jì)劃、整理即可成文。另外，它的限定性較大。考生如果不理解提綱所提示的內(nèi)容，就會(huì)感到難以下筆。因此考生要掌握提綱作文的以下寫作技巧：,，,1．認(rèn)真審題和分析所給出的提綱，認(rèn)清題目和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、大致內(nèi)容以及文體。 2．每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)可以作為文章的一個(gè)段落層次。段落的展開應(yīng)圍繞提綱的中心和內(nèi)容，不能偏離，也不能任意增減。 3．提綱只是對(duì)文章的提示和概括，不是主題句。考生需要根據(jù)提綱的性質(zhì)，寫出完整的、體現(xiàn)提綱主旨的句子，使之成為主題句，然后圍繞主題句進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展。,4．收集材料支持主題句。材料可以是例證、親身經(jīng)歷、名人名言、諺語警句等。應(yīng)當(dāng)注意的是，所選材料要與文章的主題相符，即要“扣題”，同時(shí)要具有典型性，能充分說明問題。在有多個(gè)例證的段落中，還要注意各個(gè)例證之間的連貫性。,第一步 構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文 [謀篇布局],[黃金模板] After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, ________________________ (列舉具體活動(dòng)名稱). We enjoy them very much. ________________________ (具體活動(dòng)名稱) are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides ________________________ (益處一), they also ________________________ (益處二)．,Here I have some suggestions. To students, ________________________ (具體建議一); to schools, ________________________ (具體建議二)． Dear friends, please ________________________ (發(fā)出呼吁), which will not only make your school life colourful, but also improve your learning.,第二步 打造亮句，增色文章 1．在我們學(xué)校，擁有各種各樣的課外活動(dòng)，例如藝術(shù)和 體育。 ?We can take various kinds of activities in our school, such as arts and sports. ?In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.,2．踢足球和閱讀故事都是我的最愛，因?yàn)樗鼈兘o我?guī)砗?多好處。 ?Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. ?I like both playing football and reading stories very much, for they do a lot of good to me.,第三步 串句成文，保證流暢 After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.,Here I have some suggestions. To students, you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework. Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colourful, but also improve your learning.,(2012·濟(jì)南模擬) 假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的李華，你想?yún)⒓用绹?guó)某大學(xué)在你校舉行的“赴美交換生”的選拔賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇120—150詞的自我陳述。要包含以下內(nèi)容：,1．參加目的； 2．興趣特長(zhǎng)； 3．未來打算。 參考詞匯：交換生 exchange student ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________,參考范文： Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Li Hua and I am now in Grade Three, Class Two from Guangming Senior High School. I want to be an exchange student of your school. I would like to apply to join the program. Firstly, my listening and speaking skills on English are good. In class, our English teacher often praises,me for my excellent English capabilities. Secondly, I am very interested in American culture. My parents and I once went to America on a trip and it left me a very good impression and I fell in love with this country. Lastly, as to my personality, I am an open-minded young boy who is good at interpersonal relationship.,Therefore, as what I have stated above, I'll be thankful if you accept me as an exchange student. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,