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1、概要寫(xiě)作概要寫(xiě)作Summary writingSummary writing高考新題型高考新題型概要寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（概要寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔（2125points）：）：1.理解理解準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋，涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)所有要點(diǎn) 2.準(zhǔn)確準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的使用相應(yīng)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3.完全完全使用使用自己的語(yǔ)言自己的語(yǔ)言。(60-80W)4.有效有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分連接成分，使概要，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊contents(內(nèi)容內(nèi)容)language skills(語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言)structure(結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu))Once upon a time,industrial goods

2、 were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to

3、the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our indu

4、strial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of wa

5、ste is a virtue?（182W）Step 1.Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Nowadays industry has persuaded us t

6、hat products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging m

7、aterial that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of w

8、hat we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 1 How to get the key points quickly and correctly?(如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉要點(diǎn)如何快速、準(zhǔn)確地捕捉要點(diǎn))抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息Para 1：Once upon a time,industrial goods were

9、 made to last forever.If you bought a car or a stove,it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment.You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.detailed exampleu忽略具體事例忽略具體事例topic sentence概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn)概要寫(xiě)作難點(diǎn) 2 How to express the key points by using your own words properly?(如何靈活詮釋，規(guī)避抄襲的嫌疑如何靈活詮釋，規(guī)避抄襲的嫌疑)charac

10、teristics1.Once upon a time,industrial goods were made to last forever._,industrial goods were made _.Some time ago;In the past;Decades agoto be used for a long timeto function well for a long time;durable近義詞替換近義詞替換You paid good money for it,and you took care of it.Decades ago,industrial goods were

11、made durable.spent much money ontreasuretreat it kindlyYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Decades ago,industrial goods were made durableYou spent much money on it and treasure it.Para1.use it carefully Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to

12、 throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is

13、 bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!topic sentencedetailed examplescharacteristicsresultu忽略具體事例忽略具體事例 Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which

14、 is a great waste of the earths resources.Just think of the cars that are traded daily,just because they are out of style.Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought.And we shoppers have to pay for that material!1.Nowadays industry has persuaded us

15、 that products couldnt last a long time.2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.3.This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great waste of the earths resources.Modern Industrymade us believeconvincednot permanentModern industry has convinced us that products are not p

16、ermanent.short-lived近義詞替換近義詞替換2.It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them.It is more expensive to repair them than to throw them away.改變主語(yǔ)（形式主語(yǔ)）改變主語(yǔ)（形式主語(yǔ)）正話反說(shuō)、反話正說(shuō)正話反說(shuō)、反話正說(shuō)This has led directly to the“throw-away society”which is a great wa

17、ste of the earths resources.which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.改變句式改變句式result in Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them,which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.Para2.Para 3：提煉相關(guān)信息

18、提煉相關(guān)信息 Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children.This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now.When we have no resources left,then we will start to take care of what we have.But why cant we act before this happens?Why cant we try to build a society in which the p

19、revention of waste is a virtue?過(guò)渡句過(guò)渡句We need to save resources before its too lateThis wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.We are running out of resources and we need to take action.This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.We are running out of resources and we need to take action.We

20、 need to save resources before its too late.Para3.This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.We are running out of resources.We need to save resources before its too late.Decades ago,industrial goods were made durable.We spent much money on it and treasure it.Modern industry has convinced us t

21、hat products are not permanent.To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them,which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.We are running out of resources.We need to save resources before its too late.(71W)Polish your writing有效有效地使用了

22、語(yǔ)句間的地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分連接成分，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊1921分分However,Therefore,Step 1：Step 2:Step 3:Step 4:讀懂文章大意讀懂文章大意抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息抓住主題句或關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息How to write a good summary?Conclusion靈活運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言，對(duì)關(guān)鍵信息進(jìn)行改編?kù)`活運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言，對(duì)關(guān)鍵信息進(jìn)行改編添加有效連接成分，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊添加有效連接成分，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 The food we eat seems to have a great effect on our health.Alth

23、ough science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat,it has,at the same time,made many foods unfit to eat.Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well.That food is related to illness is not a

24、new discovery.In 1945,some researchers realized that things commonly used to keep colour in meats and other food additives（添加劑）（添加劑）caused cancer.Yet,these additives remain in our food,and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings（包裝）（包裝）of foods are helpful or harmful.The additives whic

25、h we eat are not all so direct.Farmers often give penicillin to their animals,and because of this,penicillin has been found in the milk of cows.Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health,but just to make a profit.The farmers are simply trying to fatten the animals in order

26、to get a higher price on the market.Although some countries have tried to control such things,the practice continues.（201W）The food we eat seems to have a great effect on our health.Although science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat,it has,at the same time,made many foods unfit to ea

27、t.Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well.That food is related to illness is not a new discovery.In 1945,some researchers realized that things commonly used to keep colour in meats and other food a

28、dditives（添（添加劑）加劑）caused cancer.Para 1：(1.)The food we eat seems to have a great effect on our health.(2.)Although science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat,it has,at the same time,made many foods unfit to eat.(3.)Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness i

29、s related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well.1.Our food affects our health.2.Although science has greatly improved the quality of our foods,some are still unsafe to eat.(3.)Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty p

30、ercent of cancer is related to food as well.3.Research has proved that most of our diseases are caused by food,including cancer.Our food affects our health.Although science has greatly improve the quality of our foods,some are still unsafe to eat.Research has proved that most of our diseases are cau

31、sed by food,including cancer.Para 1：Para 2：Yet,these additives remain in our food,and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings(包包裝裝)of foods are helpful or harmful.The additives which we eat are not all so direct.Farmers often give penicillin to their animals,and because of this,penicil

32、lin has been found in the milk of cows.Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health,but just to make a profit.(1.)Yet,these additives remain in our food,and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings of foods are helpful or harmful.(2.)The additives which we eat ar

33、e not all so direct.(3.)Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health,but just to make a profit.1.We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not.2.They affect our body indirectly.(3.)Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health,

34、but just to make a profit.3.Some farmers raise their animals with additives to earn more money.We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not.They affect our body indirectly.Some farmers raise their animals with additives to earn more money.Para 2：Para 3：The farmers are simp

35、ly trying to fatten the animals in order to get a higher price on the market.Although some countries have tried to control such things,the practice continues.Some countries have taken measures to stop such things,but in vain.Our food affects our health.Although science has greatly improved the quali

36、ty of our foods,some are still unsafe to eat.Research has proved that most of our diseases are caused by food,including cancer.We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not.They affect our body indirectly.Some farmers raise their animals with additives to earn more money.So

37、me countries have taken measures to stop such things,but in vain.(77W)it有效有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分連接成分，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，使概要結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊because Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscle

38、s-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to school,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of

39、time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these ex

40、tra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda.People who skip breakfast often feel so h

41、ungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish

42、you have a good figure.Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits.Here are several ways to make that happen.Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles-both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off.Walking the family dog,cycling to sch

43、ool,and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.If people change their habits,they will surely succeed in losing weight.Whether people can lose weight or not depends on their living habits.Taking mo

44、re physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.Increasing the amount of regular exercise will benefit people a lot.One reason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in“screen time”-the amount of time spent watching TV,looking at the computer,or playing video

45、games.Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day.When you really get away from“screens”,such as TV,computers,IPad or mobile phones,you will really benefit a lot.Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be,and these extra calories contribute to obesity.Another key factor in weight

46、gain is that more people drink sugary beverages,such as sodas,juice drinks,and sports drinks.So choose smaller portions(or share restaurant portions)and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.It is necessary to limit“screen time”if people want to lose weight.We are supposed to reduce“screen ti

47、me”.Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.Watching out for portion sizes and drinking water instead of sugary drinks are also a key to weight loss.People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on.So they get more calories than the

48、y would have if they ate breakfast.In fact,people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast.If you really put the above into practice at once,you will definitely reduce your weight gradually.And wish you have a good figure.People should avoid skipping breakfast.Skippi

49、ng breakfast is actually not a wise way to lose weight.People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions.Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.We are supposed to reduce“screen time”.Sticking to

50、smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.People should avoid skipping breakfast.People will have a good figure if they take the above suggestions.(58W)First,Meanwhile,Besides Finally Rats eat our food or make it so dirty that it isnt fit for people at all.Thats why peopl

51、e often kill them by laying down poison.After a day or two,they find the poison still there.The rats havent touched it,even though it is near the food which they eat.People think they must be clever and cunning.Some scientists have been trying to find the best way to poison rats.They have watched to

52、 see just what a rat does day and night.They have found out that rats arent so clever.They are just very shy.Rats usually live in holes.They run from these holes to the places where they eat and drink.They have special paths on which they travel each time.So they know their paths quite well.If anyth

53、ing new,such as stone or wood,is put in the path,the rats wont go near it at first as they are too frightened.It will take them many days to get over the fear.They are also frightened to go near a place that they know,where something has been taken away.If a path goes around a rock,the rats follow t

54、he same path around the rock each time.If the rock is taken away,they will still run round the place where the rock was!They wont cross the empty place,which is now open to them,even though it would be quicker.Rats will always keep away from anything unusual to them.Thats why they wont eat poison on

55、 the first or second night.They usually wont go anywhere near it for about four days until they get used to being there.Even then they only eat a little at a time.If people want to kill rats with poison,all they have to do is to leave it out for a few days.Once the rats have got used to it,they will

56、 eat it and die.（331W）(1).Rats eat our food or make it so dirty that it isnt fit for people at all.(2).Thats why people often kill them by laying down poison.(3).After a day or two,they find the poison still there.(4).The rats havent touched it,even though it is near the food which they eat.(5).Peop

57、le think they must be clever and cunning.(6).Some scientists have been trying to find the best way to poison rats.(7).They have watched to see just what a rat does day and night.(8).They have found out that rats arent so clever.(9).They are just very shy.Para 1：(3).After a day or two,they find the p

58、oison still there.(5).People think they must be clever and cunning.(9).They are just very shy.It is generally considered that rats are smart enough not to be poisoned.They just refuse to accept new things.(1).Rats usually live in holes.(2).They run from these holes to the places where they eat and d

59、rink.(3).They have special paths on which they travel each time.(4).So they know their paths quite well.Rats are familiar with their particular paths.Para 2：(1).If anything new,such as stone or wood,is put in the path,the rats wont go near it at first as they are too frightened.(2).It will take them

60、 many days to get over the fear.(3).They are also frightened to go near a place that they know,where something has been taken away.(4).If the rock is taken away,they will still run round the place where the rock was!(5).They wont cross the empty place,which is now open to them,even though it would be quicker.If any change takes place on their usual paths,they feel unsafe to use them.Para 3：