山西省中考英語 第三輪 題型實(shí)戰(zhàn) 第43講 書面表達(dá)習(xí)題課件

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1、山西省山西省英語英語第第4343講書面表達(dá)講書面表達(dá)考情分析：近5年山西書面表達(dá)，均給學(xué)生提供了三點(diǎn)寫作要點(diǎn)，圍繞這三個(gè)要點(diǎn)讓學(xué)生自由發(fā)揮?？疾閷W(xué)生在一定的情境中，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、語態(tài)和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)情感。話題以學(xué)校生活、分享成果、表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)為主。預(yù)計(jì)2016年將仍以配圖的形式，給出三點(diǎn)內(nèi)容提示出現(xiàn)。同時(shí)話題的選取也以學(xué)生的日常生活、情緒情感表達(dá)為主。中考書面表達(dá)對(duì)考生的作文要求基本有四點(diǎn)：1.內(nèi)容完整，條理清晰；2.語句通順，行文流暢；3.沒有語法錯(cuò)誤；4.書寫規(guī)范。所以，在寫作文的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該從三個(gè)階段著手準(zhǔn)備，達(dá)到要求。一、行文前1認(rèn)真審題，抓住要點(diǎn)細(xì)心審題，細(xì)讀題目中每一項(xiàng)提示，或觀察每一幅

2、畫，弄清題意，明確中心，特別是對(duì)于我們看來非常熟悉的內(nèi)容，更要仔細(xì)推敲，有自己獨(dú)特的立意。根據(jù)所給的提示，按照一定的規(guī)律，如事件的先后順序，地點(diǎn)的更換等內(nèi)在的聯(lián)系排序，分出層次。抓住每一要點(diǎn)，使表達(dá)的內(nèi)容有條理性。2確定體裁，注意格式中考作文的題型有故事、書信、日記，對(duì)人和物的介紹等等，各種文體都有自己的格式。動(dòng)筆前一定要弄清題目的要求，以便根據(jù)不同的體裁，寫出不同格式的文章。3草擬提綱，理清思路條理清晰是中考作文得高分的一個(gè)條件。因此，草擬提綱是非常必要的。將提示中的要點(diǎn)按照一定的邏輯順序排列好，然后圍繞這一順序進(jìn)行選詞，選句型，為動(dòng)筆做好準(zhǔn)備。二、行文中1語言規(guī)范，把握時(shí)態(tài)語言準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)是中

3、考作文得高分的關(guān)鍵。行文過程中，首先要切忌逐詞逐句翻譯，避免受漢語影響，寫出漢式英語。其次，學(xué)會(huì)“揚(yáng)長避短，迂回表達(dá)”，盡量使用自己熟悉的正確的表達(dá)方式。最后，可適當(dāng)展開聯(lián)想，但不要隨意發(fā)揮。同時(shí)，正確使用時(shí)態(tài)也是重頭戲。一般來說，記敘文多描述過去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)以過去時(shí)為主；說明文闡述事實(shí)，提供信息，多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2多用簡單句，慎用長難句適當(dāng)使用長句能展示出扎實(shí)的語言基礎(chǔ)，但是在沒有把握的情況下慎用或不用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜，成分繁多的長難句，多用簡單句和有把握的復(fù)合句。以免得帶來不必要的損失。3巧用連詞，行文連貫行文連貫是中考作文評(píng)分的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。要使文章邏輯性強(qiáng)，上下文連貫，巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞是關(guān)鍵。如果

4、在簡單句的基礎(chǔ)上，恰當(dāng)采用遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等連詞，使得文章自然流暢，有渾然一體的感覺。4拼寫正確，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔認(rèn)真細(xì)心，避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。同時(shí)，工整、美觀的字體使人賞心悅目，也會(huì)給評(píng)卷老師留下美好的印象。三、成文后作文完成后，要全面檢查，避免單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤出現(xiàn)。首先，要檢查內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是完整；其次，檢查是否存在語法錯(cuò)誤，如：名詞單復(fù)數(shù)和冠詞問題；時(shí)態(tài)的前后呼應(yīng)；人稱與動(dòng)詞的變化等。同時(shí)對(duì)一些單調(diào)重復(fù)的句式做一些變動(dòng)，使文章讀起來語感更好?？傊⒄Z寫作能力的提高，需要組詞、造句語言基本能力的提高，多讀文章，多加思考，就能在中考書面表達(dá)中取得理想的成績。(2015，太原一模

5、)家庭是我們溫暖的港灣。你知道每年5月15日是“國際家庭日” (International Day for Families)嗎？你的家庭幸福嗎？請(qǐng)講述一個(gè)發(fā)生在你家庭成員之間難忘故事。你打算為你的家庭做怎樣的事情？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示要求寫一篇英語小短文。提示：Do you have a happy family?Tell us an unforgettable story that happened in your family.What will you do for your family?注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；2不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名及校名；3請(qǐng)把答案寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。 【審題指導(dǎo)】1

6、講述一件發(fā)生在家庭成員之間難忘的事，時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí)。2寫作人稱可以是第一人稱和第三人稱。3寫自己將來的打算用一般將來時(shí)。4建議寫個(gè)題目，如A happy family等。5詞數(shù)80，不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名及校名。6根據(jù)三點(diǎn)提示去寫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】1自擬題目。2開頭引出事件。我有一個(gè)幸福的家庭，爸爸媽媽對(duì)我關(guān)懷備至。3第二段描述一件發(fā)生在我和媽媽之間的事，注意時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，事件的過程描述?？梢杂蒙舷铝性~語：on the morning of.在的上午；find sth.adj.發(fā)現(xiàn)；run out angrily生氣地跑出去；wonder on the street在大街上徘徊；care

7、about關(guān)心，在意；share.with與分享；be responsible for為負(fù)責(zé)；go to school，hungry餓著去上學(xué)4結(jié)尾表達(dá)自己的感受，終于理解了母親對(duì)我的愛，作為家庭一員，決定承擔(dān)責(zé)任，使家庭更幸福。【美文欣賞【美文欣賞】From my point of view，having a happy family is the first important thing.Luckily，I have a happy and warm family.We offer to give love and trust，and share things with each oth

8、er.My family gives me love without asking for return.I think happiness is around me every moment.Every child is surrounded by the deep love.However，we often turn a blind eye to the love.On that day I deeply felt the love.One day I hurried home for lunch after school，because there would be an exam in

9、 the afternoon and I had expected to go back to school early to prepare for theexam.But when I got home，the lunch was not ready yet，I felt unhappy.When the dishes were served，I found none I like.I ran out of my house angrily and wondered on the street for a while，hungry.Then I walked to school.When

10、I got into the classroom，I saw a lunch box on my desk.One classmate told me that it was my mother who had brought it here.After opening the box，I found my favorite food inside.My eyes were almost with tears.My parents always pay attention to my growing and my achievement，but I never care about thems

11、elves.I will do a lot formy family，such as doing housework and sharing tasks in our family.As a family member，it is my duty to be responsible for my family.I will make efforts to do better.【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】from my point of view引出自己引出自己對(duì)對(duì)家庭生活的看法。家庭生活的看法。We offer to give love and trust，and share things with

12、 each other.這這是文章的主是文章的主題題句。句。We often turn a blind eye to the love.我我們經(jīng)們經(jīng)常常對(duì)對(duì)身身邊邊的的愛視愛視而不而不見見。這這句句話話用得很好用得很好，自然引出下面自然引出下面發(fā)發(fā)生的不愉生的不愉快的事。快的事。第二段第二段連連用了三個(gè)用了三個(gè)長長句句when.，I.敘述敘述連貫連貫，有有節(jié)節(jié)奏感奏感，一步一步緊緊扣一步扣一步，扣人心弦扣人心弦，令人感令人感動(dòng)動(dòng)。最后一段最后一段pay attention to，care about，do housework，make efforts to寫出了自己的真寫出了自己的真實(shí)實(shí)感受感

13、受，結(jié)結(jié)束全文。束全文。(2014，山西)學(xué)習(xí)方法、自我反思、合作交流、同伴互評(píng)是學(xué)習(xí)過程中幾個(gè)重要的方面。其中，有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法能使你的學(xué)習(xí)境界大開， 成為一種享受。在你初中的三年學(xué)習(xí)過程中，你一定會(huì)有一些好的學(xué)習(xí)方法與你的同伴分享，請(qǐng)按照以下要求寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容需包含以下要點(diǎn)：Your good learning method (s)An experience that you helped your partnersYour thoughts and feelings要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，提示詞僅供參考；2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。One possible version：Good

14、 learners must have good ways.Discussing in a group really helps me have a better understanding of what Ive learned.It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thoughts.Shy and nervous，my classmates Jeff used to hide himself behind books.Answering questions in public was quite a d

15、ifficult job for him.Once our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult problem，I encourage him to write his idea with us and we found his way was so creative.Then we advised him to write his answer on theblackboard and explain his way to us.Believe it or not，he did it and we saw his great improvem

16、ent after that.Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me.Knowledge comes from communicating and questioning.By discussing，we learn more wisely and better.A(2015，青島)現(xiàn)在，很多學(xué)生被近視困擾，請(qǐng)就此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括：1.造成近視的

17、原因；2近視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)或生活的影響；3你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)視力？(至少兩條建議)要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：80100字。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。參考詞匯：eyesight視力；nearsighted近視的；have good eyesight視力好；have bad eyesight視力差One possible version：Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now.I think the main reason is that students dont have a good habit while stu

18、dying.Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study.For example，if we leave our glasses at home，we cant take notes in class.We will feel uncomfortable when we swim with glasses.Here is my advise：on the one hand，teenagers shouldnt study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax.On t

19、he other hand，having sports and doing eye exercises are also helpful.Its very important to have good eyesight.So lets take good care of our eyes.B(2015，中考考前適應(yīng)性訓(xùn)練)“任性(willful)”，可以意為恣意放縱，但是如今的我們更愿意把它理解為率真不做作，堅(jiān)持自我，不言放棄。有時(shí)候，當(dāng)我們面對(duì)困難時(shí)，確實(shí)需要一點(diǎn)“任性”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下三個(gè)提示，寫一篇英語短文：Are you easy to give up when facing proble

20、ms?Tell us a story that you overcame the problem you met.Please list at least 2 ways to deal with the problems.要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。One possible version：Life is full of ups and downs.When we are in trouble，we should not give up easily.What matters is to face the problems bravely and spare no

21、effort to make a new start.I used to be a top student in primary school.But much to my disappointment，in the first math exam，I only got 85 points.Instead of feeling frustrated，I soon calmed down and managed to find out the reasons for my failure.Then I went out of my way to study following the teach

22、ers advice such as carefully previewing the lessons，correcting my mistakes and learning from them.My hard work was rewarded withgreat progress.Along with happiness，there must be problems and difficulties on the way to success.When we are in trouble，it is better to stick to our dream.We must keep bel

23、ieving ourselves.Furthermore，we are expected to come up with different ways to solve the problems.In addition，asking for help is necessary at times.Keep trying and you are sure to succeed!C(2015，陜西)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以A visit to home為題，為學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，敘述你探親或訪友的一詞經(jīng)歷。提示：When？Whose home？How？What?Your feelings.要求：1.請(qǐng)將

24、短文題目補(bǔ)充完整；2參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；4文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；5詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。One possible version：A visit to my friends homeLast Sunday afternoon，I went to my friends home.It was not far.So I went there by bike.In her home，we watched an English movie and listened to music.We also made some toys with o

25、ld clothes.It was not easy，but we tried.We cut the clothes into pieces.Then we put the pieces and other things together.At last，these pieces were made into different toys.How lovely they were！We had much fun when we did it.We were very proud.What a pleasant visit!D(2015，泰安)假如你是某中學(xué)初三(1)班班長李華，請(qǐng)你為?？坝⒄Z

26、園地”寫一篇短文，記述你們前天主題班會(huì) “To be sent to school or not”的討論情況。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為上學(xué)應(yīng)該接送，省時(shí)又安全；2部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為步行或騎自行車是最好的方式，環(huán)保又健身；3你的看法和建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)：801002可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 3文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。One possible version：To be sent to school or notNowadays many parents often send their kids to school by car.Should we be sent to school o

27、r not？Today we have a class meeting and have a discussion.Different students have different ideas.Some think we should be sent to school by car.It can save us a lot of time.Whats more，it is a safe way to go to school.Others think we should go to school on foot or by bike as often as possible.Regular

28、 walking and cycling are not only good for our health but also good for our environment.In my opinion，we should be sent to school.It provides us a good chance to communicate with our parents.So we can get on well with them.E(2015，江西)英文有句諺語 “East，west，homes best.” 某英文報(bào)以此為標(biāo)題， 向廣大中學(xué)生征文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面圖表信息寫一篇短文，介

29、紹你家的情況。 內(nèi)容包括：你家的居室及居住環(huán)境、家庭成員及家庭成員之間的關(guān)系， 并談?wù)勅绾巫屇愕募腋篮?。提示?.短文應(yīng)包括圖表中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫；2短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；3詞數(shù)不少于80, 開頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。One possible version：East，west，homes bestThere is an old saying，“East，West，Homes Best.” I live in a house in the countryside.Theres a big living room，three bedrooms，a kitchen an

30、d a washroom in it.There are some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean，and I often hear birds singing.There are four people in my family.Theyre my parents，my sister and IWe are helpful and friendly.And we always get on will with each other.I am happy I have a good family.I will

31、do what I can do to help do more housework and farm work.Ill study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort，Im sure my home will be better and better.F(2015，嘉興)文明社會(huì)，從我做起。請(qǐng)就下圖的不文明行為和所產(chǎn)生的后果用英語寫一篇短文，向?？疎nglish Garden投稿，倡導(dǎo)做文明人。注意：1.短文必須包括所給圖片的信息，合理想象并補(bǔ)全第3幅圖片的內(nèi)容。2必須談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。3文中

32、不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。4詞數(shù)：80100。短文首句：Last Sunday afternoon，I went to the park with my cousin.參考詞匯：果皮 skin，踩在上摔倒 slip on(slipped，slipped)，救護(hù)車ambulanceOne possible version：Last Sunday afternoon，I went to the park with my cousin.When we were walking around，we saw a boy eat a banana and throw the skin on the gr

33、ound.Just as we were going to pick it up，a man slipped on the skin.He was badly hurt and couldnt move.We called 120.Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital.It was really bad of the boy to do that! We must say no to this bad behaviour.Everyone should care about his daily behaviour and fol

34、low the social rules so that the world will be a better place.G(2015，內(nèi)江)假設(shè)你校英語報(bào)English Star為初三學(xué)生開設(shè)了個(gè)專欄：談?wù)勀愕膫€(gè)壞習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫篇短文，向報(bào)社投稿。(1)你的壞習(xí)慣是什么？(2)產(chǎn)生該壞習(xí)慣的原因是什么？(3)該習(xí)慣產(chǎn)生的不良后果是什么？(寫兩點(diǎn))(4)你打算如何改掉這個(gè)壞習(xí)慣？要求：(1)所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn)；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；(3)內(nèi)容連貫，并進(jìn)行合理拓展；(4)100詞左右；(5)題目已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。One possible version：M

35、y bad habitMy bad habit is that I spend too much time playing too many computer games.In the past，I thought it was fun and could make me relaxed.But now I realize Im wrong.On the one hand，this bad habit has made me always forget to do homework and my study has fallen behind.On the other hand，playing

36、 computer games is bad for my eyes and I have to wear glasses.So I have made up my mind to give up playing them.I will spend more time studying and doing more sports instead.H(2015，衡陽)你喜歡閱讀嗎？閱讀能使人明智，使人充實(shí)。請(qǐng)你以“Reading Is Very Important”為題，寫一篇有關(guān)閱讀的短文。要求：1.閱讀的益處；2你的閱讀習(xí)慣(喜歡的書籍、閱讀的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、購書方式等)；3你的閱讀體會(huì)；4你的

37、閱讀計(jì)劃；5號(hào)召大家多閱讀。提示：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；2短文中應(yīng)包含至少3個(gè)要點(diǎn)；3書寫工整、語句通順、連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80。注意：文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。One possible version：Reading Is Very ImportantReading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get

38、 lots of fun and learn about whats going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relaxed and happy.On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.Now I usual

39、ly buy my favorite books online.Summer vacation is coming.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities.I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.Its time for us to form a good reading habit because its important and necessary for us.Lets do more reading toge

40、ther.I(2015，自貢)假如你是Kim，請(qǐng)給你最想交流的人寫一封信，介紹你某一學(xué)科的一次考試，包括考前、考中和考后的感受。提示：1.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)全橫線上的稱謂；2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；3詞數(shù)在80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Possible version 1：Dear Carol，Im writing to tell you about my English exam.You know Im not good at English.I find it difficult.My English teacher advised me to listen to someth

41、ing interesting and do more exercises.I did what she told me and made progress.We had an English exam last week.I was very nervous.But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully.For the first time I did well.Im so happy and I feel successful now.I want to share my happiness with you.Lets help ea

42、ch other.Yours，Kim Possible version 2：Dear Mum and Dad，Im writing to tell you about my math exam.Im sorry I failed again.Before the test，I didnt sleep well，and I had a headache.So when the test began the next day，I felt a little nervous and didnt do very well.After the exam the teacher talked to me，

43、and I promised him to work harder.I will make good use of time and listen carefully in class.Ill ask the teacher for help after class.Please dont be angry.Im sure Ill improve my math quickly.Believe me and I can fly.Yours，KimJ(2015，青海)假如你是某英語雜志社編輯王林，根據(jù)下面中學(xué)生小明的來信，給他寫一封回信，解答他的困惑。要求：1.觀點(diǎn)鮮明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，內(nèi)容連貫；2詞

44、數(shù)80左右，信的開頭和落款已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor，Nowadays，many junior high school students are completely getting relaxed from busy study after graduation，so what they would like to do most is to throw books away，hang out with friends at daytime and stay up late at night playing computer games or watching TV.Wha

45、ts your opinion about this？Im looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，XiaomingOne possible version：Dear Xiaoming，In my opinion，graduation from junior high school is a turning point of life.As for teenagers，the most important thing is to have a strong body，so we should fall into a good habit of

46、 study and rest according to the timetable.Besides，learning is a lifelong journey，therefore，we should make a good preparation for high school courses and never stop learning.It will be better if we take part in some social activities to enrich our experience.Later in our life，we will face many chall

47、enges including failure and success.No matterwhat we may meet with，my advice is，“Keep moving！Dont stop！”Yours，Wang LinK(2014，蘇州)假設(shè)你校為了配合創(chuàng)建“文化校園高效課堂”活動(dòng)，最近以“學(xué)生做作業(yè)時(shí)是否應(yīng)該在網(wǎng)上找答案？”為題做了一個(gè)調(diào)查。調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)一些學(xué)生贊成，但許多學(xué)生反對(duì)這種做法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)調(diào)查情況和下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，以“Think Before You Search Online”為題用英語寫一篇短文。注意：1詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2短

48、文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。 贊成者反對(duì)者你自己觀點(diǎn)1.不會(huì)做題2.學(xué)習(xí)別人3.節(jié)省時(shí)間1.不利能力提升2.不利思維發(fā)展(至少2點(diǎn))考生自擬One possible version：Think Before You Search OnlineSome students now have a new use for the Internethelping them with their homework.But different people have different ideas about it.Some st

49、udents agree with it.They sometimes dont know the answers to the problems，so they have to turn to the Internet.They think they can learn from other people.At the same time，its easy and it saves time.However，not all the students welcome this.Many students think simply copying the answers wont improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.I think students should first think over the problems by themselves.If we use the Internet properly，it could be a good way to study.